FMP

On talking with management it was brought up that the cut out technique didnt really read that well as the darker sections stood out more than others and didnt read easily quickly.

So to help this I applied a tint behind the text although I am not sure this is realy working. Another idea was to change the colour of the rectangle but I really didnt like this either.

I really don't like the dark colour over the top at all!
I don't want to use this as I think it doesn't make the 'reveal' seem exciting, fresh new, it looks a bit like they an imprisoned.